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英语短文改错(共有10个错,第11处起不计分)

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英语短文改错(共有10个错,第11处起不计分)
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for your help great services while I stayed at your hotel.I'm
writing to ask your help with sending back my camera that I forgot in your hotel.
I check in on July 7th and out on July 11th and stayed in room 603.Perhaps
becauses of I left in a rush from the airport,I made the mistake of leving my camera in the room.For it was a gift from my parents on my 16th birthday,it is very importance to me.It is a white Canon Ixus860.I would be very grate if you could help mefinding it.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Lucy
第二行 help后加and;at(your hotel)改成in
第三行 ask后加for
第四行 check改成checked;
第五行 becauses改成because;from(the airport)改成to;of (leving应该是你打错了leaving)改成that
第六行 on(my 16th birthday)改成for;importance改成important
第七行 finding改成find
再问: 第二行貌似就是in your hotel