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短文改错,每行一个错,.

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短文改错,每行一个错,.
my parents and i went to the park last sunday.
there were lots of visitor standing in front of the ticket
window .we waited a long time and buy three tickets.
in the tiger mountain of the park ,i was too eager
to see the fierce frightened animals that i quickened
my steps through the crowd.unfortunate.i got
separated from my parents.i had hard time looking
for them ,and i had no luck .wandering in the pafk ,i felt
alone without any companions.worse still ,i had no money,
so i had to walk to home ,covering as much as 5 kilometers.
第一行sunday首字母改成大写,即Sunday,星期首字母要大写.
第二行lots of visitor中的visitor加s,即改成visitors,可数名词复数.
第三行buy改成bought,动词过去式.
第四行too改成so,和后面的that从句构成so...that...结构.
第五行frightened去掉前面已经有恐怖的,凶残的,这个词是受惊的,就多余了.
第六行Unfortunate改成Unfortunately,副词作状语.
第七行had hard time改成had a hard time,固定用法,渡过艰难时刻.
第八行and 改成but,和前面是转折关系,不是并列关系.
第九行alone改成lonely,即孤独的意思.
第十行walk to home改成walk home,home前面不能加介词to,因为home是副词,回家的意思,所以前面不能用介词to.