高一英语短文改错1.I am very excited to have accepted an e-mail from

高一英语短文改错
1.I am very excited to have accepted an e-mail from you .I am glad you have made so great progress that you can write your e-mail good Chinese .I read your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you sent it to me .How time flies!Our friendship has lasted for several months .We have got to know but learned a lot from each other.Yes,it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from me.Thanks again for writing to me.I am looking forward to hear from you soon.Best wish to you and your family.
2.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play .All over the world men and woman,boys and girls enjoy sports.Since long ago,many adults and children called their friends together to spend hours,even days play games.One of the reasons people like to play is thatsports help them to live happy.In other words ,they help to keep people strong and feel good .When people are playing games ,they move a lot .That is how sports are good activities for their health.Having fun with their friends make them happy .Many people enjoy soports by watching others play .In American big cities ,thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.
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Not all people like to work but everyone likes to play .All over the world men and women,boys and girls enjoy sports.Since long time ago,many adults and children called their friends together to spend hours,even days playing games.One of the reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to live happily.In other words ,they help to keep people strong and feel good .When people are playing games ,they move a lot .That is why sports are good activities for their health.Having fun with their friends makes them happy .Many people enjoy soports by watching others playing .In American big cities ,thousands buy tickets to watch football or basketball games.
哎``上面那个也是我答的``本来想都不留名的``不过好象这个不得行了`上面准确率点``下面有不确定的`` 你应该把十句十句的标清楚的~