求修改英语作文As I grow up,I realized that there is a wal which I c

求修改英语作文
As I grow up,I realized that there is a wal which I can't see between me and my parents.We called the wall Generation Gap.
I still remember when I was a little boy I have too much to talk to my parents.However days or nights,eating or watching.But when I stay at home with my parents,I feel embarrssed.Because I have no words to say.So I have to pretend to be watching TV or reading books to let them know I was busy so that I have no time to chatting with them.
I am confused,I want to be my parents' friend,tell them my thoughts.But when I want to say it,I don't think they can understand me and support my views.
To solve these problems.I ask my Chinses teacher for a help.He is an old man and kind to every one.He told me to have a try.To my surprise,my parents konw too much about mu thoughts and give me sone good advice.
The Generation Gap between I and my parents is a wall that make of paper.
逻辑,单词,语法,语句什么的.

As I grow up,I realized that there is a wal(wall) which I can't see between me and my parents.We called（call） the wall Generation Gap(两个G,小写即可).
I still remember when I was a little boy I have too much to talk to my parents.However days or nights（前面直接接逗号,no matter in daytimes or at nights）,eating or watching（这个watching 我不是很明白,watching TV?还是 reading?）.But when I （am）stay （staying）at home with my parents,I feel embarrssed.Because I have no words to say.So I have to pretend to be watching TV or reading books to let them know I was(am) busy so that I have no time to chatting(chat) with them.
I am confused,I want to be my parents' friend,(to)tell them my thoughts.But when I want to say it(改为something比较好),I don't think they can understand me and support my views（改为ideas）.
（In order ）To solve these problems.（句号改逗号）I ask(asked) my Chinses teacher for a(a去掉) help.He is an old man and （he is ）kind to every one.He told me to have a try.To my surprise,my parents konw (know)too much about mu(my) thoughts and give me sone(some) good advice(加s).
The Generation Gap(小写) between I and my parents is a wall that make（made） of paper.
再问： 表达上有什么需要改的吗？我意思表达的不是很好
再答： 您是几年级？
再问： 大一。
再答： 大问题没有吧。。。语序什么的就这样吧~~~O(∩_∩)O~有问题可以百度HI我
再问： 哦，谢谢了哈