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短文改错last sunday ,our class organized some volunteer'sactivit

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短文改错
last sunday ,our class organized some volunteer'sactivities,in which all of us took active part.We divided into three groups.group 1 went to the park,which they planted trees,watered flowers and cleaned the grass-lands to make them more beautiful.group 2 made their greatest effort to give the bus station a thorough cleaning.before being cleaned,and the station took on a new look.group 3 go to the old people's home to present wonderful performances to make the aging there happier.what a meaningful day!
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Last Sunday,our class organized some (volunteer) activities,in which all of us took (加入an) active part.We (加入were) divided into three groups.Group 1 went to the park,(where) they planted trees,watered flowers and cleaned (去掉the) grass-lands to make them more beautiful.Group 2 made their greatest (efforts) to give the bus station a thorough cleaning.(After) being cleaned,(去掉and) the station took on a new look.Group 3 (went) to the old people's home to present wonderful performances to make the (aged) there happier.What a meaningful day!