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要求：各大学开设了各种各样的选修课； 学生因为各种不同原因选择不同选修课；以你自己为例……
What electives to choose
Nowadays,different kinds of electives are offered by different universities,students are having more and more opportunities to broaden their horizons and foster their specialties .I's of a variety of resons that students select their electives.Take me for example,I choose Japanese as my elective course,because I am interesting in animation,which is mostly produced in Japan.What's more,I wish to learn animation from Japanese in order to innovate our country's animation.Last but not least,as three languages I'd acquired,it would do me good in my career.
要求：各大学开设了各种各样的选修课； 学生因为各种不同原因选择不同选修课；以你自己为例……
What electives to choose
Nowadays,different kinds of electives are offered by different universities,students are having more and more opportunities to broaden their horizons and foster their specialties .I's of a variety of resons that students select their electives.Take me for example,I choose Japanese as my elective course,because I am interesting in animation,which is mostly produced in Japan.What's more,I wish to learn animation from Japanese in order to innovate our country's animation.Last but not least,as three languages I'd acquired,it would do me good in my career.
选择什么选修课
当今社会,不同的大学开设了不同的选修课,学生有了更多的机会来拓展自己的视野,培养自己的专业技能.学生在选择选修课时有不同的理由.就拿我来说吧,我选择日语作为我的选修课是因为我喜欢动漫,而大多数的动漫都是在日本制作的.更重要的是,我希望通过学习日本动漫从而来提高我国的动漫制作水平.最后,作为一门第三语言,它对我将来的就业会有帮助.
再问： 我的意思是，如何修改？
再答： 做语法词组上的修改吗？
再问： 是的，谢谢！
再答： be offered by 可以用be provided by,第二句可以改成students are getting more chances to open their eyes and foster their specialties. there are several reasons that students make the choices at electives. take me for example 可以换成 as for me , because 应该换成 for, interesting 应改成interested, which后面的is 应该是are， produced 还是用made 比较好。Japanese 应该用Japan. as three languages 应该将as 放在 language 后面 差不多就这样了
当今社会,不同的大学开设了不同的选修课,学生有了更多的机会来拓展自己的视野,培养自己的专业技能.学生在选择选修课时有不同的理由.就拿我来说吧,我选择日语作为我的选修课是因为我喜欢动漫,而大多数的动漫都是在日本制作的.更重要的是,我希望通过学习日本动漫从而来提高我国的动漫制作水平.最后,作为一门第三语言,它对我将来的就业会有帮助.
再问： 我的意思是，如何修改？
再答： 做语法词组上的修改吗？
再问： 是的，谢谢！
再答： be offered by 可以用be provided by,第二句可以改成students are getting more chances to open their eyes and foster their specialties. there are several reasons that students make the choices at electives. take me for example 可以换成 as for me , because 应该换成 for, interesting 应改成interested, which后面的is 应该是are， produced 还是用made 比较好。Japanese 应该用Japan. as three languages 应该将as 放在 language 后面 差不多就这样了