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Dear Sir or Madam,Nice to contact you We are glad to know yo

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Dear Sir or Madam,Nice to contact you We are glad to know your name and address on the Internet .
Here writing you with expectation of establishing business relationship.Now we take this opportunity to introduce our company.
Our company was founded in 2006.We have a very large international business with lots of countries.
If something is attracting ,please let us know,then we should send you the price sheet.After you confirm the price ,the samples also can be dispathed to you for the purpose of examining the quality.Hope our products meet your market.So that we can start our business relationship for mutual benefit.
Thank you in advance and looking forward to having your kind views on our business cooperation proposal.
Your prompt reply would be highly appreciated waiting for your kindly reply.
求各路大神修改这篇短文的语法错误
我收到这样的邮件几乎不看!

我个人认为要靠MAIL来增加业务这样的介绍不够!应该要加上图片或更多的产品知识叙述,不要告诉你想联系的新意向客人去哪哪网站或除开这邮件的其它地方能看到你的产品,人家还会考虑是否有病毒的问题!

当然也不能太长,太长工作太忙,看都不想看!