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《一棵开花的树》的英文翻译哪个版本更好

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《一棵开花的树》的英文翻译哪个版本更好
1、
A TREE IN BLOOM
How do I let you meet me,
At my most beautiful moment .
For this,
I beseeched the Buddha for five hundred years,
I beseeched him to let us meet in earthly life.
Buddha let me become a tree,
Growing on the roadside that you pass by every day.
Under the sunlight,
It carefully bloomed with flowers all over,
Every bloom is my longing from a previous life.
When you come near,
Please listen carefully ,
Those shivering leaves,
Are the passion of my waiting.
And when you finally passed by unawares
Those that fell off and covered the ground,
Friends,
Those are not flower petals ,
Those are my withering heart.
2、
A Blooming Tree
May Buddha let us meet
in my most beautiful hours,
I have prayed for it
for five hundred years.
Buddha made me a tree
by the path you may take,
In full blossoms I’m waiting in the sun
every flower carrying my previous hope.
As you are near, listen carefully
the quivering leaves are my waiting zeal,
As you pass by the tree
without noticing me,
My friend, upon the ground behind you
is not the fallen petals but my withered heart.
哪个版本更好,更适合朗诵?说出理由!急求!
第一篇比较好,从各个角度来讲,都是第一篇好.我也不怎么会表示啦,从感情表达和声理乐理来讲都是第一篇好