作业帮【帮我改一下英语三级的作文】把错误指正出来。
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【帮我改一下英语三级的作文】把错误指正出来。
这是作文题目；下面是作答，帮忙把错误和明显不通顺的地方改改，谢！
Dear John Smith,
I want to invite you to attend a reunion party of our class,which will be hold on Surtuday the 23th. of Feb. at 6 o'clock,at the Fuchun hotel No.112.As you know,our former English teacher is a good person,who is interesting and well-knowlege at our school .Now we graduated from school for many years. So we all miss our classmates and the teachers and our school life.It's the purpuse that we reunion this paty of our class.We take a great pleasure to invite you to join our party.We are looking forward to hearing from you.
You sincerely
Wang Lin
1.23rd
2.in the Fuchun hotel...
3.interested
4.have graduated
5.so，and 之类的连词不能开始一个句子，所以so we all 前面不应该是句号。
6.写作时不能用so,因为它口语化，应该用therefore, thus 等高端词语代替。
7.our classmates,teachers, and school life.
最好多用些transition words,使它看起来不流水账。然后我想问，什么叫we take a great pleasure??
2.in the Fuchun hotel...
3.interested
4.have graduated
5.so，and 之类的连词不能开始一个句子，所以so we all 前面不应该是句号。
6.写作时不能用so,因为它口语化，应该用therefore, thus 等高端词语代替。
7.our classmates,teachers, and school life.
最好多用些transition words,使它看起来不流水账。然后我想问，什么叫we take a great pleasure??