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What is the happiness?
Different people may have different answers about this question.Some one may say that:getting more and more money will make me happy;someone else may disagree with them,and I am the second one.
Money can help us to get the basic materials for living,like food,house,closthes and so on.While once you get all of this,will you happy forever?Of coure not.When you get a piece of bread,you will want two,and there,and more and more,never satisfied.
In my opinion money is just the necessaries for surviving.Enough is enough.We don't have to speed all of our time on getting more money,but speed time on the interesting things and enjoy yourself.In the front of happiness,meney means nothing.
So what is the happines indeed?Being satisfied,that's my answer.No complaint,no depress and be optimistical about your life.Don't always think the bad things may happen and be worried.Try your best to get what you want,and learn to release yourself when you fail.If you do this,you will find you are the happiness person.
What is the happiness?
Different people may have different answers about this question.Some one may say that:getting more and more money will make me happy;someone else may disagree with them,and I am the second one.
Money can help us to get the basic materials for living,like food,house,closthes and so on.While once you get all of this,will you happy forever?Of coure not.When you get a piece of bread,you will want two,and there,and more and more,never satisfied.
In my opinion money is just the necessaries for surviving.Enough is enough.We don't have to speed all of our time on getting more money,but speed time on the interesting things and enjoy yourself.In the front of happiness,meney means nothing.
So what is the happines indeed?Being satisfied,that's my answer.No complaint,no depress and be optimistical about your life.Don't always think the bad things may happen and be worried.Try your best to get what you want,and learn to release yourself when you fail.If you do this,you will find you are the happiness person.
1、第一行“Some one”应改为“Someone”;
2、第二行去掉“will”；
3、第三行“them”应改为“this”或“it”；
4、第三行去掉“one”；
5、第四行改为“to get basic materials to keep living,such as food,clothes,etc.”
6、第五行改为“But once you have got all of those,would you be happy forever?”；
7、第六行改为“never to be satisfied”；
8、第七行改为“is just necessarity for survival”；
9、第八行2个“speed”应为“spend”；
10、第九行改为“enjoying yourself.Comparing with happiness,money means nothing”；
11、第十行改为“To be satisfied which is my answer.No complain,no depression”；
12、第十一行改为“to be optimistic about your life.Don't always be worried about that the bad things may happen”；
13、第十二行去掉“learn”；
14、第十三行“happiness”是名词,要修饰“person”需要用形容词形式“happy”,或者可以改为“you would find that you've got the happiness.”.
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2、第二行去掉“will”；
3、第三行“them”应改为“this”或“it”；
4、第三行去掉“one”；
5、第四行改为“to get basic materials to keep living,such as food,clothes,etc.”
6、第五行改为“But once you have got all of those,would you be happy forever?”；
7、第六行改为“never to be satisfied”；
8、第七行改为“is just necessarity for survival”；
9、第八行2个“speed”应为“spend”；
10、第九行改为“enjoying yourself.Comparing with happiness,money means nothing”；
11、第十行改为“To be satisfied which is my answer.No complain,no depression”；
12、第十一行改为“to be optimistic about your life.Don't always be worried about that the bad things may happen”；
13、第十二行去掉“learn”；
14、第十三行“happiness”是名词,要修饰“person”需要用形容词形式“happy”,或者可以改为“you would find that you've got the happiness.”.
我的水平有限,希望可以帮到你!