作业帮英语作文修改主要是写一件感动的事.感觉写得不够充实,希望可以帮忙再增加点内容.Everyone will have so
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主要是写一件感动的事.感觉写得不够充实,希望可以帮忙再增加点内容.
Everyone will have something affecting.So do I.
When I was in grade three two years ago,I had a fever,but I still went to school.In P.E.class,I was running on the playground under the hot sun.The sunlight was so shining and there wasn’t any wind on the playground.At first,I felt nothing,but after kept running for a few minutes,I felt too tired to run,so I took a rest at the side of the playground.
Just then,our P.E.teacher asked us to play soccer.Soccer is my favourite sport and I love it.So I joined in the game again.I was so excited to kick the ball on the playground.I was blowing and sweating.And I kicked the ball into the goal,I was very happy.Suddenly,I didn’t know what happened,I fell down on the playground.
When I wake up,I saw my teacher and classmates were around me.They were very worried about me.Some of them was wiping off my sweat,some of them was fanning my face with their hands.And my teacher was putting medicine oil on my head.I felt much better.
I had never known they were so care me.I was very touched,and I thank them for helping me so much.
主要是写一件感动的事.感觉写得不够充实,希望可以帮忙再增加点内容.
Everyone will have something affecting.So do I.
When I was in grade three two years ago,I had a fever,but I still went to school.In P.E.class,I was running on the playground under the hot sun.The sunlight was so shining and there wasn’t any wind on the playground.At first,I felt nothing,but after kept running for a few minutes,I felt too tired to run,so I took a rest at the side of the playground.
Just then,our P.E.teacher asked us to play soccer.Soccer is my favourite sport and I love it.So I joined in the game again.I was so excited to kick the ball on the playground.I was blowing and sweating.And I kicked the ball into the goal,I was very happy.Suddenly,I didn’t know what happened,I fell down on the playground.
When I wake up,I saw my teacher and classmates were around me.They were very worried about me.Some of them was wiping off my sweat,some of them was fanning my face with their hands.And my teacher was putting medicine oil on my head.I felt much better.
I had never known they were so care me.I was very touched,and I thank them for helping me so much.
1.shining不能用作形容词,可用shiny
2.after 后面应该加doing sth
3.the side of 应该为the 什么side of
4.when i woke up,不是wake up
5.some of them were(而不是was)wiping
6.so care of me
7.thanked them 而不是thank them
2.after 后面应该加doing sth
3.the side of 应该为the 什么side of
4.when i woke up,不是wake up
5.some of them were(而不是was)wiping
6.so care of me
7.thanked them 而不是thank them
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