作业帮求高手修改英语作文!Today,I gotup at seven‘o clock.At first ,I brushed
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求高手修改英语作文!
Today,I gotup at seven‘o clock.At first ,I brushed myteeth and washed my face.Then,I ate bread and drank a bottle of milk as mybreakfast.Finally,I wrote my biology homework.After dinner.My fatherand I go to the gym.And ran two rounds the gym.Then,we played tennis the pasthour.I feel very happy.
Today,I gotup at seven‘o clock.At first ,I brushed myteeth and washed my face.Then,I ate bread and drank a bottle of milk as mybreakfast.Finally,I wrote my biology homework.After dinner.My fatherand I go to the gym.And ran two rounds the gym.Then,we played tennis the pasthour.I feel very happy.
第二行as应该改为for吧,as不顺眼.那个finally可不可以改成after that?
第三行go改为went ,And后加we,两处the前面加in.
其实你的today是什么意思?是指当写日记一样叙述今天发生的事情还是什么.
再问： 写日记
再答： we played tennis the pasthour改为we spent half an hour in playing tennis 是不是表示用了一个半小时打乒乓球？这样表达更好一些 球采纳谢谢
第三行go改为went ,And后加we,两处the前面加in.
其实你的today是什么意思?是指当写日记一样叙述今天发生的事情还是什么.
再问： 写日记
再答： we played tennis the pasthour改为we spent half an hour in playing tennis 是不是表示用了一个半小时打乒乓球？这样表达更好一些 球采纳谢谢
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