我的英文不是很好,If I am very richIf I am a rich person.i can buy an

我的英文不是很好,
If I am very rich
If I am a rich person.i can buy anything i want.
first,i will like to buy a big villa and live with my parents.The house must have 6 bedrooms,a big garden,so my mom can grow her own vegetable.on summer,when i want to swim and don't need to go out.If someone brithday,i can open a party in my house.i will buy cars for each person who live in my house.
if i am very rich,i will open the restaurant for every country in the world.the food cost isn't too expensive,because some poor people don't have much money to pay and they can't taste delicious food.i open this restaurant mean is let all people to enjoy the delicious food.
my dream is to travel the world and taste different place's food.in holiday,i can use may own airplane to travel 'france,japan,italy,canada...'thoes country.every girl would like to do one thing.it's 'shopping'.if i have lots of money and i don't need to see the price and buy everything i want.
i would like to bulit a school for the poor people,because they don't have much money to let their children go to school and the children don't know how does the school look like.they can't learn anything and can't meet mor friends.if they can go to school.it is a very cheerful thing.
if i am a rich person,i can do anything i want,i can help more people,i can buy anything thing i want.it will be very interesting things.

If I am very rich
If I am a rich person. i can buy anything i want.
first,i WOULD like to buy a big villa and live with my parents. The house must have 6 bedrooms AND a big garden, so my mom can CULTIVATE her own vegetable. On summer, when i want to swim, I don't need to go out. WHEN MY FRIENDS' birthday, i can HOLD a party in my house. i will buy cars for each person who live in my house.
if i am very rich, i will open restaurantS IN every country OF the world. the food WILL NOT BE too expensive, because some poor people don't have much money to pay FOR THE MEAL and they can't taste delicious food. MY OBJECTIVE TO ARRANGE this restaurant is TO let all people enjoy the delicious food.
my dream is to travel ARROUND the world and taste different place's food. in holiday, i can use mY own airplane to travel IN COUNTRIES SUCH AS france, japan, italy,canada. every girl would like to do one thing. it's 'shopping'.if i have lots of money and i don't need to CARE ABOUT the price and CAN buy everything i want.
i would like to bulit a school for the poor people, because they don't have much money to let their children go to school and the children don't know how the school lookS like.they can't learn anything and can't meet morE friends. if they can go to school, it WILL BE a very cheerful thing.
if i am a rich person, i can do anything i want, help more people AND buy anything I want.it will be A very interesting thing.
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