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英文信!题目的要求:1.your friend li ming has written to invite you to

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英文信!
题目的要求:
1.your friend li ming has written to invite you to go to his hometown together with him and you are willing to accept his invitation.write a reply to li ming,
1.to express your appreciation and acceptance of his invitation;
  2.to ask about his schedule for the trip;
  3.to ask about what necessary preparations you need to make.
  you should write approximately 100 words.do not sign your name at the end of your letter.use "wang lin" instead.you do not need to write the address.
我的回答:
Dear Li Ming,
I am very excitied about hearing that you invited me to go to your hometown together with you.I am pleased to accept your invitation.Owing to I come to your hometown first,Could you tell me when we will start and ,What's the ways to go to the hometown,by bus or by train By the way,what do you think that what I should prepare for any necessary things?could you recommand to me Thank you for your Invitating.
Looking forward to your reply!
Sincerely Yours
Wang Lin
我这样写大致合不合要求?语法和写信的格式有错吗?请给我评点一下!
格式上,首先段落中间要空一行,然后段落开头顶格写不要空两格.落款和开头都写在左边.结尾是yours sincerely,中文名可以正序也可以倒序,但是你这样是错是,比如你是王林,英文名应该要么是 WANG Lin或者Lin Wang
内容上,首先第一句有过多内容和题目原句完全一致,建议替换说法或者起码一些词语.I'm pleased这个说法不好,有你尊他卑之意,建议改成delighted.Owing to我没见过,建议不要乱用,写As this would be my first visit to your hometown,could you tell me where to start with?And how to travel to there,by bus or train?In additional,what necessary preparation do you think should take place prior to departure?Would you please give me some advice?感谢应该放在第一句,或者干脆最后说i'd thank you again for your kindly invitation.
再问: 内容合不合题意?语法有没有错误,可以点评一下正文的内容吗?
再答: 我不是正在打字么。。。你别着急。。。你的英语确实是。。那啥就不点评了。。。大概我按你想表达的意思给你rephrase了一下,你还有什么想加的告诉我。我一时打字忘记检查,in addition或者additionally,我打的时候打错了。advice我想了想这里还是用suggestion比较好一些。其实我感觉这个题目果然还是很脑残。。没什么信息点可以写。
再问: 大哥,不好意思,我的英语确实是差劲,比起你差太远啦!希望你能多多指教!!我想再问一下,这个逗号后面是不是要用小写开头,只有句号,问号或者感叹号才要大写开头?还有这个and 这个连接词后面也是要不小写开头吗?这些细节我想了解一下,不想为了这个而扣分啦!谢谢!还有,就我写正文这种表达方式,在考试中是不是不能用?会扣很多分吗?
再答: 逗号后面却是是要小写开头的,and后面也是小写。只有句号感叹号问号什么的和专有名词才会大写。正文的表达方式?我没理解,麻烦解释一下。追问太多次你会被扣分的,如果想细问可以给我发私信。