作业帮改英文小诗Hang on to your dreams,if dreams die Life is like a bro
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改英文小诗
Hang on to your dreams,
if dreams die
Life is like a broken-winged bird
when dreams go
Life is Desolate land
Forget about the days when you lonely.
But don't forget the friendly smiles to you
Forget about the plans that didn't seem to work out right.
But don't forget to always have a dream.
Never give up,
Never lose hope.
Always have faith,
It allows you to cope.
Hang on to your dreams
Hang on to your dreams,
if dreams die
Life is like a broken-winged bird
when dreams go
Life is Desolate land
Forget about the days when you lonely.
But don't forget the friendly smiles to you
Forget about the plans that didn't seem to work out right.
But don't forget to always have a dream.
Never give up,
Never lose hope.
Always have faith,
It allows you to cope.
Hang on to your dreams
先改正几处语法错误：
Hang on to your dreams,
If the dreams die
Life will be like a broken-winged bird
When the dreams go
Life will be a desolate land
Forget the days when you are lonely.
But don't forget the friendly smiles to you
Forget the plans that didn't seem to work out right.
But don't forget to always have a dream.
Never give up,
Never lose hope.
Always have faith,
It allows you to cope.
Hang on to your dreams
批评：你写的这不叫诗,根本没有诗的味道.尤其是中间两句非常长的句子,像是老师训斥学生.下面给你稍微改得有点诗样子,你看看：
Hold on to your dreams,
No matter how hard it seems.
If you let the dreams wither,
Life's wings will teeter.
If your dreams die,
Life's spring will run dry.
Forget the days when you are lonely,
But remember the smiles you receive,so friendly.
Forget the plans gone awry,
But remember the dreams you still hold,and try.
Never give up,
Never lose hope.
When you have faith,
It allows you to cope.
No matter how hard it seems,
Always hold on to your dreams.
Hang on to your dreams,
If the dreams die
Life will be like a broken-winged bird
When the dreams go
Life will be a desolate land
Forget the days when you are lonely.
But don't forget the friendly smiles to you
Forget the plans that didn't seem to work out right.
But don't forget to always have a dream.
Never give up,
Never lose hope.
Always have faith,
It allows you to cope.
Hang on to your dreams
批评：你写的这不叫诗,根本没有诗的味道.尤其是中间两句非常长的句子,像是老师训斥学生.下面给你稍微改得有点诗样子,你看看：
Hold on to your dreams,
No matter how hard it seems.
If you let the dreams wither,
Life's wings will teeter.
If your dreams die,
Life's spring will run dry.
Forget the days when you are lonely,
But remember the smiles you receive,so friendly.
Forget the plans gone awry,
But remember the dreams you still hold,and try.
Never give up,
Never lose hope.
When you have faith,
It allows you to cope.
No matter how hard it seems,
Always hold on to your dreams.
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