作业帮帮忙改改英语自我介绍,马上就比赛了!
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帮忙改改英语自我介绍,马上就比赛了!
Hi,everybody,my name is ***.I’m 14 years old.I’m an active girl in my school.I have many hobbies,such as singing,swimming,but my favourite is English.English bring the wonderful fun to my life.Perhaps someone thinks it’s difficult to study well,but I like it.I dream of being an translator when I grow up.It isn’t a day dream.I know it’s difficult to succeed and I have to double to effort.But I want to try.I will do my best.I believe that if you try your best,everything can be done well.
帮着改改啊，100个词左右，
Hi,everybody,my name is ***.I’m 14 years old.I’m an active girl in my school.I have many hobbies,such as singing,swimming,but my favourite is English.English bring the wonderful fun to my life.Perhaps someone thinks it’s difficult to study well,but I like it.I dream of being an translator when I grow up.It isn’t a day dream.I know it’s difficult to succeed and I have to double to effort.But I want to try.I will do my best.I believe that if you try your best,everything can be done well.
帮着改改啊，100个词左右，
Hi, everybody, my name is ***. I’m 14 years old. I’m an active girl in my school. I have many hobbies, such as singing, swimming, but my favourite is English.(这里可以换一下句型,如果是比赛用的,连着N个短句都是以I开头的,听起来有点,IIII）
改：Hi, everybody, my name is ***. I’m 14 years old. In my school, I am an active girl who has many hobbies, such as singing, swimming and so on. English is my favourite. It brings a lot wonderful fun to my life. Some people may consider that English is difficult to learn, but I don't agree. I like English, and I am willing to become a professional translator in the future. I believe it isn't a day-dream. Maybe my dream is not easy to achieve, but I would like to pay double effort to realize my dream. I want to have a try and I will do my best! I believe that if you try your best, every thing can be done well and every dream will be realized!
（改了一些词,加了一些句子,比较口语化,适用于开场,希望你能采纳.）
改：Hi, everybody, my name is ***. I’m 14 years old. In my school, I am an active girl who has many hobbies, such as singing, swimming and so on. English is my favourite. It brings a lot wonderful fun to my life. Some people may consider that English is difficult to learn, but I don't agree. I like English, and I am willing to become a professional translator in the future. I believe it isn't a day-dream. Maybe my dream is not easy to achieve, but I would like to pay double effort to realize my dream. I want to have a try and I will do my best! I believe that if you try your best, every thing can be done well and every dream will be realized!
（改了一些词,加了一些句子,比较口语化,适用于开场,希望你能采纳.）
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