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语法:run-on sentence

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语法:run-on sentence
Coach Espinoza really wants this job with Notre Dame University,she is very excited about returning to the college she graduated from.
这句是run-on sentence,答案说要吧中间的逗号改成句号.那么如果我吧逗号去掉加上一个“and”来连接两句是否可行呢?
前后句子都有主谓宾,他们都是完整独立的句子,所以不能用逗号或者and隔开.
你可以在中间加句号,如果前后句意互相补充的话,也可以用分号.
不能用去掉逗号加and,如果你不想用句号或者分号把它们变成两个句子的话,唯一的选择就是用 ,and隔开
所以,要这么改:
Coach Espinoza really wants this job with Notre Dame University. She is very excited about returning to the college she graduated from.
或者:(注意,分号后面的第一个词开头字母不大写)
Coach Espinoza really wants this job with Notre Dame University; she is very excited about returning to the college she graduated from.
用and
Coach Espinoza really wants this job with Notre Dame University, and she is very excited about returning to the college she graduated from.