这是1分钟的英文自我介绍,请英语好的同学帮我找一下语法或者单词错误,能帮我改进的话更好了,会加分的

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这是1分钟的英文自我介绍,请英语好的同学帮我找一下语法或者单词错误,能帮我改进的话更好了,会加分的
Thank you for giving me the chance to interview ,and ti is my pleasure to introduce myself to you.My name is xxx,I came from a small town in HeBei province.
I major in clinic medicine and will graduate from the Inner Mogolia Medicine University in July,2013.During the past five years,I have learned systematically the theory of normal human body and illnesses and got the basic skills about clinic examination
额。。。请英语专业的来。高中生还是绕道吧

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Respected professors,【称谓很重要】
Thank you for giving me the chance to 【the】 interview.It is my pleasure to introduce myself to you.My name is xxx from a small town in Hebei Province.
I major in clinic medicine and will graduate from the Inner Mogolia 【Medical】 University 【我查了一下,贵校名字是Medical,不是Medicine,缩写为IMMU】in July this year【今年一般不用数字2103】.During the past five years,I have learned systematically the theory of 【normal --- 这个词从感觉上看不需要,但我没有查到贵校的相关专业介绍,我理解为‘人体与疾病理论’】 human body and illness as well as the basic skills 【in】 clinic examination.
另外,你前面说学的是clinic medicine临床医学,最后是clinic examination临床检查,不知何故?
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