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Hello,I’m Zoe.I’m 15 years old..

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Hello,I’m Zoe.I’m 15 years old..
I’mvery glad that I may have the chance to attend this oral English contest.Because I love English very much..
Theworld is getting samller,that’s why I think everyone should learn some English.Now English is not only a lanuage but also a tool.Learning English can improveyour memorize.If you can speak good English,you can also make more friends.Ireally want to improve my English.This contest may be a great chance to me.
Ialso have a dream about designer.New Yorkis a good place to realize my dream.So I must try harder to study English.
That’s all
Thank you for watching my video.
是要翻译么?
再问: 就是看看有没有什么语法错误,还有需要改进的地方,谢谢
再答: Theworld is getting samller,that’s why I think everyone should learn some English.

应该改成Theworld is getting samller,which I think everyone should learn some English

memorize是动词memory才是名词(不可数)

This contest may be a great chance to me.

chance改成challenge(挑战)更好一点
Ialso have a dream about designer改成I also have a dream about becoming a designer

So I must try harder to study English.这里应该不用比较级
可改成So I must try my best to study/learn English.

watching my video?你是要演讲还是……?

演讲的话应该是listening to my speech.