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英语改病句Welcome to our country.I very gald to be your guide.Now

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英语改病句
Welcome to our country.I very gald to be your guide.Now ,I'd like to tell you something more about the Great Wall of China.The Great Wall had a history of over 2000 years.It is considered to be one of the wonders in the world.The Great Wall is 6000 kilometers long,6-7 meters high but 4-5 meters wide.Tpday the Great Wall has become place of interest.And it was built by the worked people thousands of years ago.So the chinese are all pride .That is all.I wish you will enjoy you visit here.哥哥姐姐帮忙改下`~
1.I very gald to be your guide→I'm very gald to be your guide(差谓语动词)
2.The Great Wall had a history of over 2000 years→The Great Wall has had a history of over 2000 years(时态不准确)
3.but 4-5 meters wide→and 4-5 meters wide(and表并列)
4.the Great Wall has become place of interest.→the Great Wall has become a place of interest.(可数名词前加冠词)
5.And it was built by the worked people thousands of years ago→And it was built by the workers thousands of years ago(worked表被动)
6.So the chinese are all pride→So the chinese are all proud(pride是proud的名词形式,be后加形容词)
7.I wish you will enjoy you visit here.→I hope you will enjoy your visit here.(wish后用虚拟语气,所以换成hope;visit作名词,前有物主代词)
我认为有以上错误,加油吧!