作业帮帮我检查一下这量两篇英语口语作文有没有什么错误:
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帮我检查一下这量两篇英语口语作文有没有什么错误:
Reading book is my one of favourite hobby.They make me know a lot of thing in the world.Sometimes reading book make me feel happy.But some sad story make me cry.I like reading book with animals.I often buy many book in the bookshop and reading book in the library.
Last Sunday,my parents and I was going to zhe park.We played very happy .And then,my parents felt tired and sat under the tree.And Iplay the hoolahoop.Suddenly,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief,he fell down and the policeman took he away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"
第二篇第三行漏了一句，从这里开始“Suddenly ,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief ,and the thief ran to me,I hadn't time to think ,throwghed the hoolahoop at the thief,he fell down ........
Reading book is my one of favourite hobby.They make me know a lot of thing in the world.Sometimes reading book make me feel happy.But some sad story make me cry.I like reading book with animals.I often buy many book in the bookshop and reading book in the library.
Last Sunday,my parents and I was going to zhe park.We played very happy .And then,my parents felt tired and sat under the tree.And Iplay the hoolahoop.Suddenly,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief,he fell down and the policeman took he away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"
第二篇第三行漏了一句，从这里开始“Suddenly ,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief ,and the thief ran to me,I hadn't time to think ,throwghed the hoolahoop at the thief,he fell down ........
第一篇:Reading book is one of my favourite hobbies.They make me know a lot of things in the world.Sometimes reading book make me feel happy,but some sad stories make me cry.I like reading book with animals.I often buy many books in the bookshop and reading them in the library.
第二篇:Last Sunday,my parents and I went to the park.We played very happy .And then,my parents felt tired and sat under the tree.And I played the hoolahoop.Suddenly ,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief ,and the thief ran to me,I hadn't time to think ,and throwghed the hoolahoop at the thief,then he fell down and the policeman took he away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"
第二篇:Last Sunday,my parents and I went to the park.We played very happy .And then,my parents felt tired and sat under the tree.And I played the hoolahoop.Suddenly ,I saw a policeman wanted to catch a thief ,and the thief ran to me,I hadn't time to think ,and throwghed the hoolahoop at the thief,then he fell down and the policeman took he away .Before the policeman left,he said to me"You are a brave child!"