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英语翻译My new homeHello!My name is Jenny.Today I live in a new

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英语翻译
My new home
Hello!My name is Jenny.Today I live in a new house.My new house is very beautiful.There is a river in front of my house.The river is very clear.There are many many hills behind the house.And there are many trees near it .These trees are flourishing.You can see some birds are flying,some fish are swimming.
This is my new house.I like it very much.About you?
建议把many many改成many,这句有语法错误.
My new house is very beautiful这句建议把开头的My new house 改成it.
You can see some birds are flying,some fish are swimming这句最好改成You can see some birds fly in the sky,and you can see fish swim in the river,too.
还有最后一句About you?应该改成And you?
翻译:我的新家你好!我的名字是珍妮.如今我住在一个新房子里.我的新房子很漂亮.我家门前有一条河.河水很清.房子后面有许多山.附近有许多树.这些树木枝叶繁茂.你能看见一些鸟在飞,有些鱼在游泳.这是我的新房子.我非常喜欢它.你呢?句子语法错误有点多,还有分段不太好.但是还是希望你能继续加油奥↖(^ω^)↗