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英语作文修改!I think that learning English well rest with the inte

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英语作文修改!
I think that learning English well rest with the interesting of English.When I was a child,I didn’t like to study English because of my English teacher was really stern.She often criticizes us.We are all afraid of her.Afterward,my father help me with English day and night .At last,I got the good grades.I was so happy that I was willing to study English.Every morning,I read English News paper.When I was tired,I often listen to the English radio to relax my self.In the sequel,I was crazy for English.My parents were amazing to see I study English instead of have lunch.
I really have a good appetite today!I always feel hungry.At noon,I thought that two pieces of cakes are enough to I eating,so I just buy two pieces of cake.But,I eat completely and also feel hungry.I find something to eat at home.Unluckily,I can’t find anything…….And then,I go to the some restaurant below stairs.I order a noodle.At last,I become a overfeeding one~
错误很多啊
第一篇,要注意时态,词组的搭配
第二篇,应该是日记,要用过去时.