来几个大神帮忙短文改错

来几个大神帮忙短文改错
第一篇：
As we all know ,most of our middle school students feel
somehow nervous whenever we're taking an exam.It is no
doubt that exams are important to us ,but it's also important to
have right attitude towards them .As a matter of fact ,exams are
no more than a mean of evaluation；therefore ,there is no need
to worry too much about the results .Onliy by study hard every
day and making good preparations could we avoid suffering from
the pressure of exams.We had better going out for a walk before
exams.In addition to ,having enough sleep can make us full of
energy and make it possibly for us to perform well in the exam.
第二篇:
Once ,a king was looking after a good husband for his
daughter.He announced to his people who could answer his
questiong correctly would marry with the princess.The question
was what makes people laugh and cry .Many people answered
the question and all were wrong .Just then ,a young farmer
came up and gave the answer “rain” .When asking to give a
reasonable explanation ,the farmer replied."It makes the farmer
laugh as his crops grow good .It makes the potter cry as
he need the sun to dry his pots ." The king was very satisfied with the
answer .So he immediate got his daughter married to the young farmer .
第三篇：
Once there lived a donkey on a small island .Every day
she walked around on the island looking for something to eat.
One day he got boring and thought of going to a new place .
All his friends asked him not to do so ,and he didn't pay any
attention to their words.He swam to other island with green grass .
In a few day,he became very fat .Unfortuantely ,one day the donkey
was caught by a farmer .He was made work hard day and night .
In a rainy evening ,he got an opportunity and fled from the
farmer's house .He wen back to a small island ,and decided
not to leave his friends again who have given him good advice.
第四篇:
One day ,two friends naming Harry and Gatty went to
a merchant for job as a secretary .The merchant gave each
of them a cane basket ,pointing towards a well in
his garden ,and said ,"Taking these baskets and draw water
from the well till dusk ." Harry thought that foolish tio
draw water with a cane basket because he slept under a
tall tree .On the countrary ,Garry kept up working .Seveal
hours later ,when he drew the basket up ,he saw some
gold coin in the basket .Finally ,the merchant gave
the job to Garry .Seen this ,Harry went away ,ashmed.
改对了我提到40分 求
还有一篇，感激不尽 第四篇最后一行打错了应是ashamed
第五篇：
Vijay and Raju are friends .One day ,they went into forest
for a trip .They were enjoying the beauty of nature while they
saw a bear coming at them .All of them were very frightened .
Raju ran up to a tree and climbing quickly .He did not think of
Vijay,who was not so good for tree climbing .Vijay thought for a
second.He has heard that animals do not like dead bodies.He fell
to the ground but held his breath.The bear smelled him for a while
and went away ,thought he was dead.Raju asked Vijay ,"What did
the bear whisper into your ear?” Vijay replied ,"The bear asked me
to keep away from friends like you ," and went on his way lonely .

1, we 改成they
2,It 改成There
3, towards改成for
4,mean改成method
5,therefore改成Therefore
6, study改成studying
7,could改成can
8, going改成go
9,and改成to
10,exam改成exams
第二篇:
1,\x09after改成for
2,\x09correctly改成correct
3,\x09去掉with
4,\x09makes改成made
5,\x09answered前加have
6,\x09gave后加out
7,\x09asking改成asked
8,\x09good改成well
9,\x09need改成needs
10,\x09immediate改成immediately
第三篇：
1,\x09there改成here
2,\x09she改成he
3,\x09boring改成bored
4,\x09and改成but
5,\x09to后加the
6,\x09day改成days
7,\x09unfortunately
8,\x09work改成working
9,\x09went
10,\x09a改成the
第四篇:
1,\x09naming改成named
2,\x09job前加the
3,\x09towards改成to
4,\x09and改成to
5,\x09that后加was
6,\x09because改成so
7,\x09countrary改成contrary
8,\x09去掉up
9,\x09Coin改成coins
10,\x09Seen改成Seeing
第五篇：
1,into改成to
2,while改成meanwhile
3,All改成Both
4,climbing改成climbed
5,for改成at
6,has改成had
7,but改成and
8,and改成then
9, into改成at
10,asked改成told