英语作文求高手修改My daily life –morningAlways I get up at 6:00.Then

英语作文求高手修改
My daily life –morning
Always I get up at 6:00.Then I can boil the water and bush my teeth.It is important for me to wash my clothes .I think being careful to care me is responsibility .Because I am a adult .If I cannot blend my work and life ,I will not have a happy time .
While I am washing clothes,I am cooking my breakfast .Often,I may eat noodles or an egg or either noodles and an eggs.If not have well and enough food,I will not be heavily.What are me doing after then?Start working?No!I will jog.I jog every day.A saying says,an apple a day,do not see a doctor.I want to say,jog a day,do not see a doctor.It is helpful to everyone.Surely,I can choose run fast or walk.Although ways are different,effects are same.For your family,yourself,go to outdoors,and do right sports,you must have a powerful body.Believe my words,you do not do wrong.
At 8:00.I study.I read English newspaper in Monday to Thursday.On Friday morning I go to Shan dong province library by bus.I may read book long long time .I like reading and I can spend 10 hours reading,in that time,do not eat everything.I like inference novel,but I should not read them.Because my English is bad,my math is not good.I must study English and math hard.Meanwhile,I train my interest about economy by reading.Gradually,I like economy a little.My hobby is becoming a manger in Wall Street Stock Exchange in US.Buying a big house to take my parents and my grandmother,I love them very much.I do math.problems on Sunday.As a science department in a senior school,I must show my talent in math.
My morning is this.For lightly future,I must study hard,jog and be careful to me.

My daily life –morning
Always I get up at 6:00.Then I can boil the water and [brush] my teeth.It is important for me to wash my clothes .I think being careful to [take care of] me is responsibility .Because I am a adult .If I cannot [harmonize]my work and life ,I will not have a happy time .
[ I am washing clothes while cooking my breakfast] .Often,I may eat noodles or an egg or either noodles and an eggs.If [do] not have well and enough food,I [would ]not be [heavy].What [should i do] after then?Start working?No!I will jog.I jog every day.[As a saying goes],an apple a day,do not see a doctor.I want to say,jog[ for]a day,do not see a doctor.It is helpful to everyone.Surely,I can choose [to] run fast or walk.Although ways are different,effects are same.For your family,yourself,[go outdoors],and[ play good] sports,you must have a powerful body.Believe my words,you do not do wrong.
At 8:00.I study.I read English newspaper in Monday to Thursday.On Friday morning I go to Shan dong province library by bus.I may read [books for a long time ].I like reading and I can spend 10 hours reading,[ during] that time,do not eat everything.I like [mystery novels],but I should not read them.Because my English is bad,my math is not good.I must study English and math hard.Meanwhile,I [cultivate ]my interest about economy by reading.Gradually,I like economy a little.My[ dream ]is becoming a manager in Wall Street Stock Exchange in US.Buying a big house to my parents and my grandmother,I love them very much.I do math.excuses on Sunday.As a science department in a senior school,I must show my talent in math.
错的比较多,要努力啊
My morning is this.For lightly future,I must study hard,jog and be careful to me.