There are four season one year

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There are four season one year. There is spring ,summer ,fall and winter.I like summer very much. Because summer is very hot.I can wear beautiful dress or wear a cool T一shirt and shorts. I can also go swimming.But insummer sometimes will rains suddenly. The rains later on,it may get again. 老师您们认为我写的这篇作文怎样? 还请多多指教。

写得不好的地方还请老师指出

解题思路：在进行书面表达时，要符合英语的习惯用法，否则容易杜撰出“中式”英语，使人难以看懂.使用常用的英语句型来表达. 当表达某一意思有困难时，巧用常用词语或自己熟悉的词语来进行表达，可达到同样效果，又可避免出错. 巧用变繁为简法, 当一个较长的中文意思，用一句英语表达有困难时，可分为两句或多句表达.
解题过程：
作为一名初一的学生这篇作文整体来看不错思路清晰表达明确但文中有一些小的词汇及语法问题：
1 题目以及第一句话中两处问题：（1） season--seasons 四个季节要用复数（2）one year--in a year
2 第一行中的There is--They are
3 wear后面加a 修饰可数名词dress
4 第四行的But insummer sometimes will rains suddenly. 两处问题：（1）句子没有主语（2） will rains 不对 will后面必须接动词原形整个句子可以这样改：But in summer it often rains suddly (不需要用一般将来时用更一般现在时态就可以）
5 最后一句意思表达模糊看不出句意
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