The Chinese Dream , Our Dream

The Chinese Dream , Our Dream China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up “ policy . Our country is developing faster and faster , and is going to catch up with the developed country . But nothing will be forever . There is one thing we don’t have . What is it ? The Chinese Dream . The president Xi said that the present purpose is to achieve the Chinese Dream . It sounds really motivate . But does everyone know what the Chinese Dream is or what it contains ? Instead , the society announces the Chinese Dream all the time , on newspaper, TV, magazines . The promotion it can be seen everywhere . So I really can’t understand what do the people did these things thought .I have no idea . The society is really variable . When something is on fashion by the time ,it will pass it to everybody and make a deep impression in people heart . However , it not really make the best reaction . Sometimes it just makes people get exciting but don’t know what they are doing . So in my opinion , we can’t hold a dream that we don’t know what it is . A meaning of it is really important . But what is it ? As I think , The Chinese Dream is a big thing that made up by a lot small things . What they are ? Our dreams , Everybody must have a dream .It may be not as big as the world dream . But it leads people to do what to do . If they get the goal , they will spare no effort to achieve it , and the power appears. If everyone holds on their power to achieve it . The Chinese Dream will get a lot of power and our country will develop faster. To sum up , everyone is a part of China , so our dream is the Chinese dream . So let ‘s hold on to our spirit and make our country more and more beautiful. Chinese dream , Our dream . Let ‘s hold it . 请老师详细批改,谢谢!

解题思路： 有几个句子运用不是很准确，往后需注意。
解题过程：
1 all the time by media such as newspaper, TV, magazines .
2 The promotion can be seen everywhere .
3So I really can’t understand what do the people did these things thought 你的汉语要表达什么意思？
4However , it doesn't really have the best result
5 . Sometimes it just makes people get excited
6The meaning of it is really important
7As I think _------I think
8The Chinese Dream is a big thing that is made up of a lot of small things
9What they are ----9What are they?
10Our dream . Let ‘s hold on it
望你注意以上的句子，希望你英语取得更好的进步。
最终答案：略