作业帮欢迎新老顾客光临放假
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标题：2011年春季香港电子展Title:2011springHongKongelectronicsFair时间：2011年4月13日-16日Date:April13-16,2011地点：香港会议展览
因为是新开张的商店,不应该有“老”；又商店开张,应该是顾客；所以应该改成：“欢迎顾客光临”,比较合适.
1去掉说字,逗号改成冒号.2“新老顾客”改成顾客.3要注意分辨事物加强联想.4去掉“和培养”双重否定句：我不会不努力学好各门功课的.反问句：难道我不会努力学好各门功课吗?疏忽的近义词：大意或者忽视
Welcometocomeagain
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welcometocomeherenexttime.上楼的welcomeyou读起来怪怪的
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Welcomelatelyoldcustomertocomeathomeandabroad,talkover.
Welcomenexttime欢迎下次光临Welcometocomeback欢迎回来
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Welookforwardtoyournextvisit.期待您再次光临.Pleasevisitusagain.请再次光临
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谢谢光临!欢迎您再次光临!再见!明天见!Thankyouforcoming.Welcomecomeagain.Seeyou./Goodbye.Seeyoutomorrow.
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