假如你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,介绍你校课改以来的变化

情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“OurSpringOuting”的英文稿件.请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班

LastDecember5thourclassorganizedanactivitytocelebratetheInternationalVolunteerDay.Wedecidedtospendth

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主题：人们往往如今工作更长的时间.长时间的工作,对自己的负面影响,他们的家庭和社会,因此应限制工作时间.你同意还是不同意?长时间的工作现在是一种常见的现象,firce竞争的快节奏的社会的结果.看来,许

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Onepossibleversion:    Lastweekend,IhelpedmygrandparentspreparetheirtriptoBeidai

LastMonday,myclassmateandIsawagroupofpeoplegatheringaroundonourwaytoschool.Inordertoseewhatwashappen

LastSaturday,myfriendsandIwenttoclimbtheWestMountain.Whileclimbing,weenjoyedthesunnyweatherandabeaut

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OnOctober8thwecelebratedourschool’s50thanniversary.Agreatnumberofformerstudentsandretiredteacherscam

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Therewasaproblemwiththeparkingplaceforbikesinourschool.Inoticedtheentrancewassmallandalmostblocked.S

Lastweek,ourclassorganizedavoluntaryactivityinsubwaycars.OnFriday,weheldaclassmeetingtodiscuss whatw

LastFridaywasmygrandfather’sbirthday.Tocelebratehisbirthday,wemademanypreparations.Earlyinthemorning

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